Re: DWTS Season 16
posted at 3/27/2013 5:40 PM EDT
Okay, Robin, if you insist:) Here goes:
Ache [PROBLEM: When addressing someone directly, always place a comma after that person's name. REMEDY: Place a comma after "Ache"] if you want, you may criticize me all you like, [PROBLEM: Misuse of a comma in between two main clauses (aka a "comma splice"). REMEDY: Remove comma. Insert period:)] don't be gentle...I have learned from your comments!
I'll let you in on a little secret, [PROBLEM: Misuse of a comma! REMEDY: Remove comma. Insert colon, which will serve as an "introducer" to the information that follows after] I double check my spelling and grammar hoping you won't find errors.
I'm sure you do, but you are kind enough not to say anything ;)
If people want to post here that's fine and if they don't that's okay too [PROBLEM: This is a "fused sentence" (ie, two sentences jammed together with no punctuation). REMEDY: Place a comma after the word "fine":)].
Misunderstandings happen, people lose interest, whatever...it's all good! imo
I thought it was interesting that all the new pro dancers landed in the bottom 3 last night. I guess fans really do vote to save their favorite pro dancers as much as they do for their favorite celeb. And it might explain how DL managed to avoid the bottom 3 as well
Aly Reisman: The girl has a belly on her, huh? I thought I was seeing things at first, but nope. She definitely has a gut
Hey, Robin, I notice another message was removed today. Did you happen to see who posted it and what the message contained? Just wondering
Okay, who wants to be my date for Prom Night next week?