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I figured I'd post it here and ask you guys to take a look at it. If you like it, please spread the word to others who like sports. If you don't, well, whatever, that's your opinion. Thanks guys!
Just Started a Sports Blog
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Just Started a Sports Blog
posted at 10/8/2011 2:46 PM EDT
- beantowngm15
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Re: Just Started a Sports Blog
posted at 10/8/2011 2:55 PM EDT
- kelvana33
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In Response to Just Started a Sports Blog:dirtywaterbuzz.blogspot.com I figured I'd post it here and ask you guys to take a look at it. If you like it, please spread the word to others who like sports. If you don't, well, whatever, that's your opinion. Thanks guys!
Posted by beantowngm15
You need to check your spelling and it would help if you knew that Jagr is not Russian...Who named the 1st line the HuLK line??? That needs to end.
Oh, and on your Red Sox blog, plagerising Peter Gammons isn't a good idea. No pink hat would be calling for Bobby Valentine, because lets face it, a pink hat doesnt know who Bobby Valentine is, almost as bad as a blogger doesn't know who Ryne Sandberg is. -
Re: Just Started a Sports Blog
posted at 10/8/2011 3:21 PM EDT
- mannyortez3424
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Yo beantown, not bad...
You write the way people want to read, very conversationally...
Gotta spell check though, people always notice spelling errors when they read your stuff and it is distracting enough to take away from what you're trying to say...I mean that in general, not you specifically...
If there's one thing I have learned from my blog bostonsportsbuzz.com, it's that if the content is not visually readable, people won't read it haha...
So maybe like make the type bigger and space out it out more because it makes it easier to read...
I don't intend to come off like I know everything, but I was in your spot a couple years ago and it's tough to put yourself out there like that...
So thanks for sharing man... -
Re: Just Started a Sports Blog
posted at 10/9/2011 5:09 PM EDT
- callodthedom19
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maybe you should read my blog noonegivesashit.com -
Re: Just Started a Sports Blog
posted at 10/9/2011 8:43 PM EDT
- dezaruchi
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In Response to Re: Just Started a Sports Blog:maybe you should read my blog noonegivesashit.com
Posted by callodthedom19
I couldn't get the link to work......... -
Re: Just Started a Sports Blog
posted at 10/9/2011 9:10 PM EDT
- beantowngm15
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In Response to Re: Just Started a Sports Blog:maybe you should read my blog noonegivesashit.com
Posted by callodthedom19
Gimme a break guy. I'm looking to be the GM of this Bruins team one day. This blog will help me get into the right college and possibly get me some professional attention. Plus, it's fun. No need to be a d*uche about it. -
Re: Just Started a Sports Blog
posted at 10/9/2011 9:27 PM EDT
- callodthedom19
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In Response to Re: Just Started a Sports Blog:In Response to Re: Just Started a Sports Blog : Gimme a break guy. I'm looking to be the GM of this Bruins team one day. This blog will help me get into the right college and possibly get me some professional attention. Plus, it's fun. No need to be a d*uche about it.
Posted by beantowngm15
I also have a blog for life guidance. giveupyourdream.com -
Re: Just Started a Sports Blog
posted at 10/9/2011 9:31 PM EDT
- beantowngm15
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In Response to Re: Just Started a Sports Blog:In Response to Re: Just Started a Sports Blog : I also have a blog for life guidance. giveupyourdream.com
Posted by callodthedom19
I'm not about to give up my dream. My dream is to be the GM of the Boston Bruins one day and I fully intend on accomplishing that. -
Re: Just Started a Sports Blog
posted at 10/9/2011 11:32 PM EDT
- Not-A-Shot
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In Response to Re: Just Started a Sports Blog:In Response to Re: Just Started a Sports Blog : Gimme a break guy. I'm looking to be the GM of this Bruins team one day. This blog will help me get into the right college and possibly get me some professional attention. Plus, it's fun. No need to be a d*uche about it.
Posted by beantowngm15
This blog couldn't help you get into the Armed Forces in 1941.
You asked what people thought. They are telling you. I'm not going to bother reading it. If you misspelled one word, the entire thing stinks.
Oh, and no one will read it anyway because... -
Re: Just Started a Sports Blog
posted at 10/9/2011 11:36 PM EDT
- red75
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You want to be taken seriously, but your top headline is "F You CBS"?
As someone who does this for a real living, either get some style, push it further and use the REAL word and really throw yourself out there, or do something else. What I've read so far is the definition of trite.